My new FictionPress account!

Hey guys!

So, I’ve been working very hard on this new story idea of mine with the intention of posting it on a website called FictionPress.com. Now that I have five completed chapters, I have posted the first chapter on to my account! My username is SnowflakeSoup, and you can find my profile here: https://www.fictionpress.com/u/1006284/ The story itself is at this link: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3236428/1/A-Distorted-History

I have also taken down Memories from this blog and I will reupload it, with a few edits, on a weekly basis on my FictionPress. I would really appreciate it if any of you guys could just take a look at my story and maybe drop a review if you think it is worthy, or if you have any criticisms. Feedback is welcomed, I could use the outside opinion to reform my writing.

On another note, I do have a VERY awesome friend who’s helped me so much during the writing process. Oftentimes, we bounce ideas off of each other and keep each other company while we write our individual stories. Our best ideas have been created together, and she’s just an amazing person in general. Her pen name is Sage.Meryllis.Banks, or Sage, as I will call her. Without her, this post probably wouldn’t have even existed, as I was inspired to make a FictionPress when she made a FanFiction account. I will say that I heavily disapprove of fanfiction of all types, but I have read and edited her stories and she’s a pretty good writer. She writes Vampire Academy fanfiction, so if you’ve read the series and don’t mind reading fanfiction, go check out her profile here: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6316920/

Random poetry #1

“cold”

woken by the cold

attacked by the cold

waiting in the cold

trembling in the cold

sleeping with the cold

battling with the cold

and yet

the cold always wins

“fight”

heated voices thrown back and forth

slamming fists and fake sentiment

a fearful wait to see the end

a relief when it is over

but an anticipation that always remains

“monsters”

suffocating darkness

the ominous footsteps

the searing, smoking wound of loneliness

dragged, shrieking and screaming, into the unknown

but a squeeze from a brother’s hand

and the bright light of the lampposts

banish the faded, forgotten nightmare

A Brief Overview of Brown v. Board of Education

I’ve decided to bust out my law-and-history-loving side and write about one of the most important landmark Supreme Court cases. Brown v. Board of Education is the case that officially ended segregation in schools, though it took much longer to change the opinions of the general public. But how did that happen? To understand this case, you must know the background of another case that had been decided almost sixty years before, in 1896. Plessy v. Ferguson.

A Louisiana state law required that separate accommodations were needed for Caucasians and African Americans (The Separate Car Act). To protest this law, a black man named Homer Plessy sat down in the whites-only train car and refused to get up. He was immediately arrested. In trial, his lawyers argued that the Separate Car Act had infringed upon his Fourteenth Amendment rights, which guaranteed that every person must be given equal protection under the law. Unsurprisingly, the judge ruled against him. He appealed it until the Supreme Court decided to take the case. However, they too ruled against Plessy, stating that no rights were violated as long as the accommodations were “separate but equal.” For the first time, legal precedent stated that segregation was allowed, which set the foundation for even more segregation.

Sixty years later, in 1952, a group of African American parents sued the Board of Education in Topeka, Kansas. The case was only named after Oliver Brown, but it was comprised twelve other parents. They argued that the segregated schools violated their rights, using the same argument as Plessy. They were shot down, the judge citing the Plessy v. Ferguson ruling as legal precedent. However, the case eventually managed to make its way to Supreme Court.

The lead lawyer on the case, Thurgood Marshall, was a very smart man. He knew that if he just showed pictures of the dilapidated black schools in comparison to the pristine white schools, the Supreme Court would just give the school some money instead of desegregate the schools. He needed to prove that the segregation was mentally affecting the children. So he invented the Doll Test.

The Doll Test is a test where a child is seated in front of two dolls, one Caucasian and one African American. They would be asked several questions, such as “Which doll is the smart doll?” “Which doll is the nice doll?” “Which doll is the pretty doll?” “Which doll is the stupid doll?” “Which doll is the mean doll?” “Which doll is the ugly doll?”, so on and so forth. Thurgood Marshall performed this test on several African American children. They associated all of the positive traits with the Caucasian doll and all of the negative traits with the African American dolls.

The Supreme Court ruled for the parents in a unanimous decision. With the evidence provided with the Doll Test, they ruled that “separate is inherently unequal,” since it creates a sense of inferiority or superiority in the separated parties. With this decision, they overturned the “separate but equal” precedent left by Plessy v. Ferguson and officially desegregated the schools.

Of course, it wasn’t that easy. Many states kept their schools segregated because the Caucasian parents didn’t want their children to go to school with African Americans. It took many, many more years to change their mindset into something more open minded. But this case was most definitely the first, big step towards ending segregation in the United States.

Review of The Imitation Game (one or two spoilers)

When I first walked into the movie theater, I wasn’t expecting much from this movie. Sure, it’s an Oscar frontrunner, but the only thing I knew about it was that it was about computers and technology. And while I can operate computers fine, I don’t really enjoy learning about them. But, as with most movies, this one surpassed my expectations.

A little historical background is necessary to understand this movie. The Imitation Game takes place during World War II. It follows Alan Turing, the man hailed as the inventor of the computer, and a small team of cryptographers at Bletchley Park as they attempt to crack the code of Engima, the code-scrambling machine the Germans used to transmit radio messages. Gaining access to the Germans’ radio codes would be invaluable knowledge to the military, but their codes were almost impossible to crack. There were millions of settings and millions of possibilities. To process all of this information, Turing builds the ancestor of the modern computer to compute information faster and, ultimately, to crack Engima. However, although the movie focuses a lot on cracking Enigma, it also includes other details, such as Turing’s homosexuality and his first love, despite the fact that it was it was illegal to be a homosexual at the time.

The movie was well-paced and suspenseful. I was constantly on the edge of my seat, eagerly waiting for what would happen next. It was also fairly easy to follow, which is always a good bonus when it comes to historical movies. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I was quite saddened by the ending.

However, while the movie itself was quite entertaining, there were a few factors that I was extremely unsatisfied with. Although this movie was based on history, the director embellished every single fact and detail. There was a huge discrepancy between the actual facts and the facts portrayed in the movie. For example, the movie suggested that the codebreaking at Bletchley Park was done by a small, close knit group of people that were making no progress until they had an epiphany and made a breakthrough. In reality, that was not the case. Thousands of people were working on the project, and progress was being made from as early as 1939. There was also a scene where, after the team broke Enigma, the codebreakers decided not to use decoded information to save one of the codebreakers’ soldier brother since it would alert the Germans that Enigma had been broken. However, the codebreaker in question did not have a brother. And the codebreakers had no such authorization over the use of the information. Decisions about what information to use were made at much higher administrative levels.

Several facts about the characters were also severely distorted. The director portrayed Turing as an extremely antisocial, intelligent snob who refused to work with others, exaggerating these traits so much so that I had the impression that he was autistic. However, Turing was never diagnosed as autistic, and in reality, he had many friends and built positive relationships with his coworkers. And many of the scenes of Turing’s childhood were almost completely wrong. The movie also included a secondary plotline with a codebreaker, John Cairncross, who turned out to be a spy for the Soviet Union. He blackmails Turing into keeping his secret with the threat of reporting his homosexuality. However, this entire subplot is complete fiction, concocted just for some extra tension in the movie. There was no recorded evidence of Turing and Cairncross ever meeting. In addition to that, this plot twist blatantly slandered the reputation of the real Cairncross, who was actually a loyal, respected codebreaker at Bletchley Park. And these are only a fraction of the historical inaccuracies in this movie!

In the end, I enjoyed the movie in the theaters. It was quite entertaining and suspenseful, and I would heartily recommend it to anyone who would like an action-packed movie to keep them on their toes. However, the sheer amount of misrepresentation in this movie is quite disappointing. I do believe that writers and the like have a right to a creative license, but the extents the director went to were much too extreme, even going so far as to falsely accuse a real person of being a spy! So, to those who were looking for an exciting, but historically accurate movie, this is not the movie that you are looking for. The Imitation Game is just another overly dramatized, romanticized movie, fit only for the screens of Hollywood.

Sam Tsui and Kurt Hugo Schneider Concert!

Yesterday, I went to see Sam Tsui and Kurt Hugo Schneider perform live in Freehold! Macy Kate was even with them! It was the first time I ever went to concert too and it was absolutely amazing! The meet and greet tickets were also super cheap, so me and my friend got to take pictures with them and have them sign our t-shirts!

sam tsui shirt!

For those of you who don’t know (although I don’t know why you wouldn’t have already heard of these awesome people), Sam Tsui and Kurt Hugo Schneider are musicians who post mashups and covers of other songs on Youtube, though Sam has just made a debut album called Make It Up. Sam is usually the one who sings and Kurt plays the instruments and produces music. Macy Kate is one of their friends and another singer on Youtube. Here’s one of Sam and Kurt’s mashups that I absolutely LOVE:

Honestly, I didn’t think seeing them live would be as amazing as it was. I mean, seeing any performance live would be really cool, but I figured it wouldn’t be too different from their other stuff–just that they would be on a stage in front of me instead of in a music video.

In reality, though, seeing someone you love to watch and listen to in person instead of on a computer screen was straight up surreal. I had resigned myself to never being able to see them in the flesh, and they sort of became just cool, awesome people I’d only ever see on the Internet. But now, they were actually in front of me, not just a channel on a video sharing website! It was like my world imploded. My friend and I actually saw them walking around iPlay America before the concert and I was just speechless.

Their performance was awesome! They sounded just as good live as they do in their videos, which is just a testament to their musical talent and how autotune-less their videos are. Sam did drop the microphone once, but other than that, it was pretty much flawless. They played all of my favorite songs from their channels and then some–I was pretty dejected when the concert actually ended.

Sam and Kurt are spectacular performers and their concert was fantastic! My only wish would be for them to come to New Jersey again!

Sword Art Online is Terrible (Spoilers)

I’ve never actually posted about anime on this blog, but I love watching it. In fact, I’ve been watching it since I was six years old, when my brother watched Azumanga Daioh with me, though I barely remember it. Although I’ve come to realize that a lot of anime out there in the world is terrible, I always prize the rare diamonds in the rough. So once, I decided to hit up Sword Art Online. Big mistake. It’s quite an unpopular statement, but Sword Art Online is terrible.

There are almost no lasting characters. Kirito just meets random people. None of them stick around with him at all. Mostly, they just die ten minutes into the episode, leaving the watchers wondering why Kirito is crying over this person he barely knew. And the ending of the first arc was terrible! Kirito and Asuna BOTH died, but somehow they both live in the end! How is that even possible? And when they asked the creator why he would trap the players in a game, he just responded with “I don’t know.” What? Are you serious? You can’t just make the villain do something with no reason at all! Who the hell is evil enough to trap kids into a game and kill them if they die in-game for no damn reason? That’s some of the worst writing I’ve ever seen! But the worst thing isn’t the sporadic characters that come and go–it’s the characters that actually stay.

Asuna is a horrible character.

First off, it seems like she’s got multiple personality disorder. When she’s wearing her hood, she’s all mysterious, cool, and badass. But as soon as the hood blows off, she’s a cutesy tsundere who always clings to Kirito. They tried to make her badass and skilled in battles, but her personality outside the battles is sweet and adorable. The makers of this show tried to make her both extremes at the same time, but they executed it terribly. Instead, they’ve made a completely contradictory, mess of a character that we’re supposed to like. For example, she says, “I didn’t come here to eat good food,” yet the same girl maxes out her cooking stat. Asuna just doesn’t make sense. It’s clear that the makers of this show wanted her to be at least a little badass, but they took that away too, in the second arc. They just turn her into the classic “damsel in distress” and she barely contributes anything to the story.

Kirito is too perfect. I understand that protagonists should be strong and cool, but Kirito is honestly way too good. I could understand him being a beta tester and more experienced than the others, but being overleveled? That’s way too unfair, and it means that we as the audience never fear for him dying, since he can kill anything in a slash. This also takes the interest out of the battles, because Kirito’s never gonna die, so why have the battles in the first place? And the reason for him being overpowered in the second arc is utter bullsh*t. All his stats from the previous game get transferred to Alfheim Online? That’s LITERALLY cheating! It’s not that he farmed a lot, or that he beta tested the game. He just cheated his way into the game!

As for the second arc, I actually enjoyed the fact that Asuna was never there, although it was terrible writing for them to do that. But that forced love triangle was ridiculous. Sugu was Kirito’s surrogate sister for God’s sake! And I know that Kirito was actually adopted and that Sugu’s actually his cousin and whatever, but to him and Sugu, they were brother and sister. Who in the world would fall in love with their older brother? Sibling relationships are loving, yes, but they are nothing close to that! I have an older brother who’s awesome and amazing, but I’d never fall in love with him because our relationship is distinctly familial. I can’t even imagine thinking of him in a romantic way! Obviously, the creators of Sword Art Online were running out of ideas or they never had any siblings.

In the end, Sword Art Online is absolutely horrible. It doesn’t deserve ANY of the praise it’s given.

The Book Thief Review (No Spoilers)

The Book Thief, by Markus Zusak, is my favorite book of all time. It is an amazing novel, with beautifully crafted characters and an exceptionally written story.

The Book Thief takes place in Germany during World War II. This is a commonly used time period for many historical fictions, most of which are focused primarily on the suffering of the Jewish people. However, The Book Thief sticks out from the crowd in many ways. The protagonist is a girl named Liesel Meminger, and it shows how she grew up in the midst of Nazi Germany. While it does have an arc when her family hides a Jewish person in their basement, the majority of the book is focused on the life of a German, living under the rule of Hitler, and the quiet protestations of those who weren’t quite so swayed by Hitler’s promises. Not only that, but the ups and downs and the various events of the book can feel sweet and heartwarming one moment but dark and miserable the next.

The characters are amazing. The way Liesel grows from a nine year old child to a fourteen year old teenager documents the way she changes and grows as a person. Every one of her interactions with everyone around her cement the other person’s character and show a glimpse of the person beneath the surface. From her kind, lovable idiot of a best friend to the warmth yet seriousness of her foster father to even the soft, grieving nature of her spiteful next door neighbor, every single character has importance and depth. And the unknown narrator’s cynicism and sarcasm is a welcome addition to add depth to the story.

The aforementioned unknown narrator tells the story beautifully. He unveils the events of the story, many times ahead of the schedule. The terrible, heartbreaking moments that are spoiled hit the readers like a sack of bricks, but they hope that it isn’t true…only for it to be twice as difficult when it really does happen. And while he does break the fourth wall a little bit, it’s always done well and for a good reason.

In the end, The Book Thief is an amazing story. It’s certainly a must read for anyone (at least anyone who doesn’t like stories like Hunger Games and Divergent) and the tear-jerking, heartstring-pulling ending is enough for even the manliest of men to tear up a little. It is indeed a masterpiece.